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This is a nice little piece, with much to like, and only a few areas for possible improvement. To begin with the stronger aspects of th...


This is an interesting piece; to start with the positive aspects, I really like your brushwork. The figure seems to flow, from the hair...

by ~dom10268

This is an excellent landscape. To start with the stronger aspects, I really like your usage of color, blending yellow, shades of brown...


This is truly a splendid painting. To begin with the positive aspects, I really like your usage of color, bright and lively while simul...

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Artist. Philosopher. Lunatic.
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United States
I am William Burns, an artist based out of middle Georgia. I make ink drawings, in a style I call Linear Abstraction. I make some digital works, but that isn't my focus. I am concerned primarily with patterns and textures, not color or shapes. I sell prints of all my works, available here or at my Fine Art America account, and I will sell my originals (those I still possess) to interested parties. PM me if you want to discuss buying an original.
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As anyone who follows me knows, I make all of my works critiqueable, and periodically write critiques of my own. During my time here, I have noticed certain trends in how critiques are written. Often, those who take on the admittedly uncomfortable task of criticizing someone else's work avoid making negative comments altogether. They will write glowing accounts of the strengths of a work, and then omit altogether any discussion of flaws, weaknesses, or areas for improvement. I believe that negative comments are essential to the proper functioning of the critique system. Negative comments do not have to be accusatory, inflammatory, personal, or polemical, but should focus on the critic's perception of the weaknesses of a given piece. An honest review of a work includes addressing its flaws, and failing to do so is not really a critique, in my opinion, but simply praise. It's always nice to receive praise, and I personally thank everyone who chooses to bestow it upon me, but it does not help improve me as an artist. Negative comments, however, do help me to improve, and I believe most artists use negative comments to that end. Of course, it's possible to go too far in the opposite direction, and not every negative comment is worthy of consideration, but omitting them altogether is a mistake. If all you have for my works are praise, that's fine. Just leave a comment saying, "I like this." Critiques are for helping artists to improve their work. For those looking to start writing critiques, here is some advice. Find at least one negative thing to say about a work, and one positive thing to say. I would recommend putting the positive first. You can certainly add more onto that, but having them both gives the artist something to work with.
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~WasteShield Apr 23, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Beatifull
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*Promethicon Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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~WasteShield May 4, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
No, thank to you.
You did an awsome work
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~HoshiSupesu Apr 21, 2013  New member
I like your work . "Flowers for Alderran" and " The Circulardity" are the best for me 'cause I see and imagine the draw with what you had done .
(I'm sorry for my bad english .)
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*Promethicon Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your English is just fine. I'm glad you stopped by, and that you like my works.
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~HoshiSupesu Apr 21, 2013  New member
I'm happy so if you think my english is fine . I know that I often write somethings wrong but I don't do it on purpose . I just hope someone say it at me . So, thank you and good carry to the next .
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*Promethicon Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I get the gist of what you're saying, and that's what's important. If I need clarification, I'll ask for it.
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Mood: Overwhelmed ~DragonChaser123 Apr 18, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gosh your work is just so amazing. from a far on some of your pictures I couldn't see all of the details too well but when I got closer, seeing all of that tiny detail in a picture was just stunning. A very well done to your fine artwork, Sir!!!
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*Promethicon Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! It's always nice when someone notices those details.
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~DragonChaser123 Apr 19, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
they're amazing ;3;
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